Here’s my first real render and attempt at anything. It’s an MP3 Player! WOOT and best of all, it’s shiny!
A bit too dark on my screen.
You may want to work on the buttons a bit. They look like they were made of clay. The screen could be a little crisper, the text is too soft and they need to be more pixelly if you are going for the LCD look
Oh, and make it shiny…er.
The mp3 player looks like it is floating, and maybe you could add more lights.