First post (light saber from Flipped Normals tutorial)

Hi to everyone, this is my first post of the light saber.
If you have any critics or suggestion, pls feel free to share it, it help’s me a lot to grow up as an artist, of course there is not much to say here… just wait for the next post

Thank you for your time

Here are the links to the video and the channel.

Pd: sorry if my english sucks, it’s no my mother language