please be honest, if it is terrible tell me.
Turn on some lights
ooh, a black rectangle with white ovals. So interesting -.-
Ya, its too dark! More definition of the scene needed. Light needs to light up some thing:
I would say that it doesn’t make any sense, those lights are just circles with emit values but they’re not actually effecting the scene at all. It’s kind of stupid but in Blender Internal render engine you need lamps to light up the scene at all times. I like the ominous feel of the super-dark room but in the meantime it’s not really a scene.
Its got a nice spooky quality, but needs more interesting stuff