First render

Artwork Focused Critiques
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Hi, my name is Aether, I’m quite new here.

After much trial and error with blender for some months now I decided I’d give it another shot. So this is my first (serious) render using cycles. Let me know what you guys think, would mean a lot!

http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/2704/cocafinalblurred.png

p.s.: I cheated and blurred a bit in GIMP trying to delete some white pixels in the black spot where the hole is. :RocknRoll:

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It’s pretty good for a first render!
However your materials are off, and your modelling isn’t perfect. The tab is too small and the crease around the top isn’t sharp enough. You need to mix in some glossiness with your textured material, it will make it way more realistic!