First Work Posted

Hi my name is Danilo from Italy,

First of all i want show you work to not influence your feedback :slight_smile:


Until today I wasn’t sure to post my model because I thought it was too early. But now I change my mind. I guess the opinion of other person can hel better to improve my skill.

Let’s write few word to my work. In this work I used Blender Cycles with 150 passes, but i think that 300 passes it’s enough to have more clean scene. Unfortunally I did not able to find the spot light with halo cone; At first I wanted to make a dust effect in the air.

I know there would be more work to have a realistic scene but I wish to know if the scene have a serius problem or anysthing to change.

Thank you very much for your attention and I’m sorry for my writing mistakes :slight_smile:

Bye!!

You need to turn on a light or two. You can still keep it dark and moody with more light.

i like the wall textures. looks fairly realistic! :slight_smile: i think you should add more details to your image. e. g. the edges of the table are too sharp, there could be some scratches and damages. i wonder what you can do with the window, maybe there´s a moon or stars on the nighttime sky. cool idea, keep it up!

Start Using the compositor some color balance on this would take you miles!

i like the wall textures, they look fairly realistic! you should add some details to your scene. e. g. the edges of the table are too sharp. imo, there could be scratches and damages (assuming that the table is old). nice idea, keep it up! :slight_smile:

oops, double post!! my fault…

along with what the others have said. the arch in the doorway looks odd, also the hallway looks like it’s just 2ft wide. I enjoy this piece keep up the good work.

Thank you!! I will follow your advice, see we soon