My latest work, any critiques welcome.
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-Aaron
Wow. Nice work with the camera, haha. But serously, wow. Very nice, very nice. 'Bout the only thing I can see might be the leaves, the ones in focus look a little, I don’t know, bland. Maybe try giving a little more contrast to the texture? But very, very nice so far!
looks a little flat. The intersecting petals reveal the lack of geometry
Looks great!
Some ideas that I believe will add to the image:
- Upping the subsurf level on the leaves, as I can see the individual verticies
- Enable Film Emulation, it does wonders!
- Render with more samples
I agree that it looks nice.
I also agree that it is too low poly for this close up render. But maybe you modeled it to be a part of a meadow created by a particle system? For that purpose it would be overkill to give it more geometry. For a close up shot you could take one of them and refine the geometry of course.
Yep, looking great, very nice colors.
I agree with others who say it’s low poly. In addition I think that’s not exactly a close up shot. Try filling 50% or so of the image with the main flower and giving it all the details you would see from that close, it would look really cool IMO.
Image is not showing up!
Fixed, Thanks for the heads up.
Lovely, although the shapes seem to be a little too clean, if you know what I mean: It makes it look a little bit artificial. maybe some displacement maps would make a difference? 