[Focused Critique] Made this little scene

Artwork Focused Critiques
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Hello, made these little scene a while ago. Want to know if something is off, I can improve anything, work on something maybe. To say shortly, Feedback needed <3
(I used Noel 3D-s tutorial, it’s not my scene completely, just added some things, tweaked here and there and so on. Took the idea from Noel 3D on youtube)

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1hMF_BIDPaU6wdWS75kkemQtqr5339cJv/view

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1CRmytK0HUxT6Ra5Ft9IwhAVC6Mboy1dC/view

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Hmm the CoffeeScene.png is very dark so notmuch to see… CoffeeScene4.png has some kind of light but also very dark… IDK if the out-of-focus of the pen would be so intense (i’m no photo camera expert). Maybe if the coffee vapour is more visible? But now the background is also some kind of gray… and ups :laughing: i now download the image viewed in 100% lots of detail !!! :star_struck:… Niiiice!
Maybe choosing a not black cup? Or a bit more light to show some details of the headphones… but maybe that’s the mood you are loking for?

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thanks for your time !
I’m still in learning process of the color scheme thing and on lighting scenes up too :laughing: actually I tried to light up headphones more, but couldn’t do it properly, so yeah went for mood thing as an excusion reason :laughing: