Foggy Morning Field

Hi

A foggy moring field, any criticism is appreciated :wink:

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At first sight, really nice. Very peaceful in every way. The colors, the fog… :yes:

Now, the details… First, the vignette really lacks of subtlety.

The grass is too simplified. On one hand it looks very natural with the random broken leaves and, on the other hand, it’s obvious that we’re seeing only straight sticks, not leaves. The end of the emitter plane is also too obvious.

The same criticism applies to the trees which lack of definition. Add one more level of subdivision for the branches. And fix the shadows! With the sun so into our face, it’s impossible to miss that they are going in the wrong direction.

A little bit more love and you’ll get it. It looks so nice at small scale.