Four legged run - crits please

Artwork Animations
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And the blend file http://www.pasteall.org/blend/5384
if you want to scrub and look at the animation more carefully.

Using waylow’s pedro rig ( http://www.blendswap.com/3D-models/animals/pedro-2-5-6/ )

any crits very gratefully received, feel free to be mean/picky!

thanks!

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Its not easy to say. it’s a playful looking run. I think I see a tiny small… like I can see the frame it cycles on. It looks good. the turn at the end looks really good.

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I think it looks very good for a cartoon style animation. My only crit is that animations too far from Camera tend to look better. I would love to see that run cycle side to side, so we can spot “possible” problems.