I finished an image of my all time favorite hero, Link, and one of my favorite characters from Ocarina of Time, Saria. I know it is quite ficticious, but I had a good time with it. All modelling and rendering done with Blender (internal renderer). I’ve been fooling about with toon shading and such. Enjoy!
Imho, the guy’s face expression looks strange. Also I would change his right hand pose.
The girl’s dress looks like would ‘go’ i opposite direction than she run.
The posing is a bit off in places, but I won’t repeat what those people said. The lighting, however, is very, very good. Good use of shader technique there, it really helps the picture.
Oooh, the Legend of Zelda. I declare myself as Fanboy then…
But back to work - I think your images are overly bright which gives the image quite an unnatural look. The pose was already mentioned but looking at your new WIPs it’s getting better, I’d say. Keep at it.
I do like the grass, btw…and the models themselves are very cool, too! A very cute couple.