futuristic (almost there) soldier (more excessories to come)

I need to know how I am coming along. I am still adding stuff to this dude but I just want to know how his basic form is looking. If you see anything that stands out as fake just tell me and Ill try my best to fix it.

edit: I know it looks like he is top heavy but I think that it is just the perspective

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That looks really good, especially the clothing and everything. The only thing that seems a bit fake to me is his face, it looks kind of low-poly-texture-ish, don’t know how to describe it. That could be just the lighting though. But the proportions are good, AFAIK.

You’ll have to post alot more images then just one to get
some good focused critique

thx 4daniel and JDA, here is the wire view, I think I may need to work on the topology.

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as you say it may be the perspective, but to me it looks as though his arms are too long and legs are too short.

dunno if they are, just looks that way to me slightly.

yah, it looks that way to me too, here it is rendered with yafray, does it look any better?

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