A girl in the snow. Done in pencil on lined paper.
C&C, as always! 
Hello? Is anyone there? 
…lined paper…cough…
Sorry. That’s all I had at the moment. :-?
The shoulders are weird, and too manly. Her body figure seems to alter between completely facing foward and angled. And the depth is minimal.
You should use Modron’s method of practicing proportions: He makes a simple model in Blender, and draws on top of it. I hate yet to try that, but it seems very useful.
I’ve been looking at this and thinking about what to post, and I still haven’t an idea of what I want to say.
Here’s a tutorial you’ll find useful:
http://www.polykarbon.com/tutorials/body/stick.htm