Godfire Hyper-battleship

From the beggining of time we were promised a machine,one that could end the war between our mortal enemies. war was the only thing we knew, war was the only thing we could do. we waited what seemed like an eternity for The “promised machine” through dark and light ages our peoples finest engineers had trouble building the leviathan to come. Wehad assumed that this machine was a spaceship, how wrong we were, the end result was complete insanity, it was the size of our world, it was not a spaceship, it was a Hyper-ship. The singled ship alone tore apart fleet after fleet, unscathed. cannons at full power 10,000 shot plasma missile silos were not even depleted, we warped around like a puma compared to the sloth ships they had. We had created somthing amazing…somthing powerful… then we saw it, somthing bigger and stronger than us… along the side were the words of the newley crowned battleship of theirs… Godfire.

P.S it is purposely hard to see…

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Ooh! Nice intro. Although it’s hard to critic if you can’t see it.

wow… have you set your monitor to ‘tan’ ?
I have a very bright and clear LCD but I really can’t make out what it is.

i would like to see an animated introduction… camera moving over ship, ship flying around in a debris field, would be nice =)

Show the model first, then deelop the scene. We can’t see anything to offer critique or advise about, so you won’t get much useable comments yet. If you want, just also put up a wireframe image and a render without the world environment, with AO on maybe so we can see the model itself. I like the write up, nice tension building :slight_smile:

hmmm maybe making it hard to see was pretty stupid, here is an easier to see pic

whoops i forgot to put up the image

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I actually liked it when it was harder to see-maybe have it visible only from the reflection of its own thrusters or something?
ps: nice intro!