This is your life (0:03) Do what you love (0:08) and do it often (1:17)
My reaction on seeing “This is your life” is: No, it’s not. You don’t know me.
I suspect what you mean is something along the lines of “You only have one life” or “Your life is now” or “Live in the present”
There is too much time between the second text and the third. Took me a few seconds to recall the second text and make the connection, which is obvious when they are strung together above, but not so obvious when they are separated by over a minute of music and video.
Tilting ALL the pictures and posters hanging on the wall seems forced. Unless a small earthquake just hit. One or two out of line might make the image more ‘lived in’, but all of them out of line seems like the occupant deliberately tilted them, which makes him seem like an oddball.
Thank you so much for the constructive critique, Orinoco. I really really appreciate it! I’ll keep those in mind and will apply them to my next pieces, psychologically reminding myself of such.
I agree with you. However, I didn’t have the luxury of render time during that time. But thinking about it now, I could’ve done a few tricks localizing the Max bounce in that area only.