What I would like is some feedback on composition and if anyone besides me find it just remotly humorous (or gets whats going on) - I know from experience that I stare myself blind on my projects and can’t find faults etc.
I LOVE WALLACE AND GROMIT!!! That looks pretty good. Those little black things look kind of bad. The butt of the axe is too round. And I think you should make the weight have a metric measurement (U.K.) and not so heavy.
Awesome stuff :D. I love the trap contraption but I cant figure out how its supposed to be activated. (I know, I need a “BIG RED BUTTON THAT SAYS DO NOT PUSH” to figure it out: http://www.85qm.de/up/BigRedButton.swf )
Only crit would be the shadows and contrast. There is too much difference in luminosity between different parts of the image and its annoying in a way. Try reducing the darkness of the shadows and see if its better. If you decide to leave it as it is I would complain too much though
I knew the missing trigger would be noticed right away
Saxofoner91: I too thought there was something wrong with the footprints but I don’t know how else to show that the mouse was there and left with the cheese…
(thinking…) I removed it now ps. it reads ‘lb’ after ‘100’ on the weight
Phrangkk: Yeah ears need retouching - doing that right now
The reason I chose for him to stare at the camera was for you to see his pondering expression; any thoughts on improving this?
Slepnyrl: Thx I hope the trigger is more clear now (since its actually there now ) - mousetrap springs, pulls the string connected to the stick releasing the weight. - maybe I need to think of a new more clear trigger… And you’re right - im now too happy about the lighting myself so I’ll experiment more .
Again, thx for the tips, I’ll try to accomondate them all
edit: two versions: one brighter than the other. - make your choise