This is my first time in this Forum
I learn Blender just one year
Please forgive me my poor English

This is the practice of my hair

You can see the top of her head through the hair, so it needs more hair children.
You can use google translate page and you write in your own language and then translate it to english and copy and paste correcting any error google does in the translation. That way you can learn english almost without effort. Just Have two window browsers instead tabs for more quick copy and paste.

Doing a woman is the most difficult thing in my opinion. Your mesh already looks as a woman and that is already a good step. Now you need a better skin shader. I like the eyes!

Thank you for your recommendations

i like the curly one. needs more hairs as mentioned but the form and shape is really nice