here i m showing you a 3d model of a machine which i did few months back but yet to apply texture on it and render it in a presentable quality…How i can be so lazy sumtimes…
Please check this model and comment on the areas which can be improved…
Pls ch
The model looks very nice and contains a lot of detail. I really had to look closely for areas of improvement as you have done a very nice job. Some comments:
For me it is not clear what it should do. Looking at the details there is a suggestion that parts should be moving but in practice wouldn’t be able to move as they seem to be attached to one of the sides of your machine.
The wheels look immense compared to the size of the rest of the machine. This would be wheels to transport a heavy cannon in soft terrain. Or almost the wheels of a steam roller.
How would the machine be transported? Should it be attached to a car, a horse or pulled by hand? There seems to be no handle or attachment.
On the machine as well as on the spokes of the wheels I would reduce the rounding of some of the edges. The circular end plate that sticks up on your last screenshot needs to be rounded a bit more.
I am looking forward to a render of your textured model.
Thanks for your advice Ray actually i did all this modelling with a referance image and so not sure about its use. It is yet a confounded confusion for me as well …;). I named it as " Auto Canon " coz, it is very similar to a Canon model.
and for textured model…i’ll b doing it very soon…and definately let you know about it.
At last…Lots of thanks for ur reply to this thread and i hope u’ll keep guiding me in near future as well…
