Help Me Step Up My Content! New YouTube video for your review

Hey guys, I finished the sequel to my first character animation, called Worlds Apart…

for my YT channel and I wanted to get some feedback if you feel inclined. It came out pretty good, I am just new at starting to make a little storyline (I was just winging it with graphics for my music) but I don’t feel confident in my workflow. Maybe I need to start storyboarding or something to have a set goal but I end up just making it up as I go and on the first animation, https://youtu.be/f8lbhY63mA0 I was happy with my results. This one I don’t know yet. The main thing is I am growing and the motion graphic ideas for my songs keep coming and now I have created characters even though I have to learn rigging (or learn why my rig won’t work right). But I have no direction and am a noob, want to learn geonodes and procedural stuff and pretty much everything really. I am an earnest student (joined CG Boost Community after taking the starter launchpad course) and could use a word or two from more experienced voices about what I could do to improve my work. Also improve my workflow, basically anything that can help me get my game up to speed. I am aware that my eye is not as good as a more knowledgeable animator. Thanks for your help!