Hula Girl

Being obsessed with the Legend of Zelda: Wind Waker series, I tried going for a cel shaded effect, and I think I did a pretty good job. The only thing I need to do now is to peer edit and then work some more. Constructive criticism is always welcomed.


um… You realized you posed her face in the Sex Doll “O” of pleasure expression?

Assuming she is not supposed to be an inflatable sex doll…

I can’t see any indication of her elbows. so her arms look like one long tube.

you need to exaggerate her knees more so they give more a shadow in the toon shading. and her calves should turn into the back of her knee if the side view. maybe flatten the back of her knee and thigh.

If she is supposed to look like a love doll cut her skirt into individual flaps.
flatten the end of her arms to make hand then extrude out a thumb.

extrude of her feet the squash them alittle bit and you’re done.

Yeah, point taken lol. I didn’t think of that but your right it does look kinda dolly-ish. All this time i was whittling away at the shoulders becasuse of the fear that they’d looks boy-like, but I guess I overdid it. No it’s not supposed to be an inflatable sexy time doll, and i guess I should change the mouth ( I already fixed the knees, but this pic isn’t updated).