The face could use some creases, I think. The lighting also doesn’t really seem to make me think “action” but more “walk in the park” for some reason. But I suppose that is interesting in its own way.
im sorry i wasnt thinking when i was doin that… i accidentally posted that post on the wrong subject so i just wanted people to know about it because it was realy kool to see all the kool models that amazing artist post
oh and i realy do love that picture…its kool