i want feedback

rendered in blender internal
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what i need to do ?:slight_smile:

I would try to put the little alien more to the middle, because it draws the focal attention to the right due to it’s bright eyes, yet there are many “lines” that converge in the middle, which draw the attention to the middle/far back.

Also, personally I think some areas need a bit more light. For instance the bodies lying on the ground, I’d like to see them more clearly instead of just black shapes.

Last but not least, for me the picture is overall a bit too nervous, especially the arches, walls, lights and that block thing on the left. To me it seems that they are reflecting everything too much, and therefore their shapes are not clearly visible.