I want some critiques

Hi, i’m really a beginner in Blender and i`m begin to understand and get more serious about the professional aspects of the program. See this artwork and could you give me your opinion or suggestions to get better please?

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I would add depth of field. Make an Empty and put it to the point of interest. Turn off the caustics, turn on the denoiser to reduce the noise and put color management to filmic and base contrast. Add if not done a translucent shader to the paper.

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