In Soffitta

La boheme (Giacomo Puccini), “In Soffitta” Scene. Adolf Hohenstein sketch.


A very nice image. I see a few things that could be improved: 1. There are some very sharp corners around the window. Some beveling perhaps? 2. The floor and the big beam in the ceiling are very shiny. A bit plastic looking. 3. It looks very strange with strong sunlight and two kerosene(?) lamps lighting up the walls. That should be impossible.


Cool… I love your rendering.
Nice work.

The furniture looks too small. even for children’s furniture.