Industrialish scene *updated*

Here’s an image I’ve been working on for a while - still needs a bit of tweaking, but so far…



EDIT: Now that I look at it, the side pillar-like things really need some texturing work:o. I’ll get to that soon and post an update…
Thanx for the c&c

looks preety nice but you are right about tweaking, needs more work but so far it’s great job
my opinion is that the side pillar needs more variation with light. what i meen is some parts of it should stay more in dark. if i got it right, the only light source is the one we see or is there some more? i mean if it were real scene…

yep maybe some negative lights in between the pillars. I might change the texutre too.

An update:



Clearly not everything has been fixed, but it’s an improvement.