Hello! Here I’ve got my current render I’m working on. It is a bar, but with a fireplace.:eek: I’m also trying some new and interesting lighting setups. Critique to your heart’s content!
Overall, I like it. I think that the depth of field is lacking a solid focal point. I would shift the whole camera right by a bit and find a way to add a bit of detail to the wood-panel wall I think a good clock could be perfect. Also, It seems that you are going for a minimalist aesthetic but I feel that the fireplace ought to have a few more details, perhaps some black powder-coated steel accents, a vent, grille-work, something. The fire and fuel (coals?) could use some work though I personally wouldn’t know where to start. Otherwise, a well executed concept.
I’ve elaborated on the fireplace now, as well as added a clock to add detail. Critique to your heart’s content!
the clock idea is good, but i think, clock background must be different, not wood, maybe a black and white photography.
Yep, are interiorism tips, not technical…
And try a warm light,
