into the deep

Artwork Finished Projects
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quick render, turned out quite nice imo,

http://img74.imageshack.us/my.php?image=landscapepirateshiprendkg7.png

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OOOOOHHH…Looks great mayn…i like it alot.Just has a spooky feeling towards it…peace!

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Nice textures, would look good for like…
A fake sea monster movie trailer…

Again, cool.

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thanks for the comments guys :slight_smile:

maybe ill make a HD animation of a run through of the scene and just at the end ill have a huge creature swim past and then itll fade and say coming soon! “the fish who was big”, what do you think of the name?:cool: lol

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ha, exactly what I meant :slight_smile:

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Great work :slight_smile: great mood and lighting :slight_smile:

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I hate it when my aquarium looks like that!!
serious crit: Nice lighting and mood but I think its a little to murky I cant see much of any thing its a nice background but it begs for a subject.

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i wanted to go for that murky look, it might be to much, but i think it really adds to the atomsphere of the scene, also when i add a new object for the scene. i should have posted this in WIP but hey im calling this image finished. my new one will probaly use a diffrent scene, i was thinking of making a scene that looks like the coast of the caribean and having coral, fish and a wreck shipped, maybe have the sun glaring through the water. will be alot harder to do though. but it will be a good excerise in lighting and enviroment modeling.

p.s. tommorow night im gona start on a kick ass 17th battleship that has been wrecked off a coast on a reef. should have all the modeling done by sunday, if im lucky :slight_smile:

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Ha, that’s a great title… “the fish who was big”… I like it… makes me laugh for some reason.:smiley:
One suggestion: don’t you think you should have some sort of particles floating around in the water? (I don’t know if stars would work…)
ps. If you’re seriously doing this title thing, make sure you do it in a creepy ‘dripping’ font with a dramatic organ chord:D .

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hey thanks for the crits/comments im doing the caribean pirate ship for serious the render in this post was kind of a test. the particles you mentioned are what i try to aim for but it came out to noisey and small and now looks really grainy. it was harder adding stuff like that since it never seem to fit right, might just my complete lack of knowledge about particles and compostiting lol

but yeah i cant wait to do this caribiean ship wrecked, maybe have a flyby in HD resolution.

i think im gona add a title for this image though, like a mock poster :smiley:

any one want tickets for a “the fish who was big!” :wink:

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who is in it?ill be one!!

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looks good. put in some light rays maybe to simulate sunlight penetrating through the hazy water. maybe one of them could hit a ship (very cliche) or some sort of subject. the terrain looks really good.