just finished this about a week ago. let me know what you think. for some reason i wasnt able to load it directly on here if anyone has a specific reason why please let me know specifically to that item. critique is welcome.
I suspect it didn’t load because the file is too big.
I don’t understand the second light saber that seems to be just hanging in the air. I also don’t understand why she is charging from darkness into light wearing nothing but a lightsaber, without giving her eyes time to adjust. She’s just going to get herself killed by whatever triggered her fight or flight reflex. She seems to have very small feet.
dang sorry. didnt realize it actually went thru
if MODS could please delete this one?