It’s still a little rough, but I like that you tell a story there. Composition works as well. Keep it up, bro!
Thanks! I know I still have a lot to learn.
Love the idea.
Agree it’s still rough, but also agree it gains +Points for having a story.
The colours and placement of objects is very ‘busy’ and the group of objects kinda looks a bit busy for the eye to know what exactly to look at, but playind around with light and shadow will fix that.
I would maybe reduce the brightness of the candle so only the rat’s table area is illuminated and have your primary source of light on the other side the bars outside the drain-pipe, so the scene gets dark-near-black closer to the camera.