Hello every one finally i have completed first part of my animation series after the weeks of heard work
Please tell me area of improvement and suggestion
It doesn’t give the viewer much of a story or plot. It’s basically throwing the viewer in a random start and just hope for them to go along with the story. The first thing I noticed before my last statement was that in the first few seconds of the video, his feet are going through the floor. On that issue, it broke the illusion for me. Next when it actually shows the name of the video, you took away the city block environment and just left the trash cans there. You have to keep the background there when you are doing that. At the 24 second mark, was the character suppose to hide back after the coast was clear? I didn’t think that a fade away was needed for this.
Now back on the “illusion” situation. When you are creating environmental settings for your animation, in this case a city scene, you need to have buildings in all directions. You need to have them on both sides of the street and down the road so there’s no indication that there’s a cut off point. Back on the story, there is no indication on why this person is being cautious or the fact that he’s even a politician until he says it with a gun pointed at him.
Overall, the animation needs more polish. The story needs to be more sensible. The city scene needs improvement. Finally, you never have a conversation where the camera is so far away where you don’t have any close ups. Take a look at some of the shows and pay attention on how the camera is placed during a conversation. At least you didn’t break the 180 Camera line rule.
Thank you so much form your advice XeroShadow its help me alot in improving my work in feature