job

Hi guys,

It’s a pic for PR magazine of a company.
THX.

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What is the company? That pic should be in the galley!:yes::yes::yes::yes::yes:Five stars.

really cool idea, nice work.

oo this is defiantly going into the gallery

i love the whole top down view and the general feel of this render

really good work…4 starz…:stuck_out_tongue:

hey! nice use of toon lines! The character models have very pushed-back shoulders, and their faces are too specular, but I like the composition.
4 stars

Yea, I agree with free-_ality on the shoulder part. It looks amazing tho. Much detail, and original idea too.

Nice job. :]

Awesome work! Nice lighting, modelling, and just generally looks good! Love the idea as well!

Cuby

well done 4 stars !:yes:

I like it a lot and think it is very effective. But, I think you erred by throwing the background out-of-focus; certainly, to the degree that you have. I think that if I were setting up and shooting this scene, I would use a lighting-gradient but not depth-of-field to separate the foreground from the background.

You already have a clear (and quite plausible) device to center the user’s attention right back where you want it to stick … the work-lights, and a few clear specular highlights. You might even consider putting a second small spot on the phone in the rear, because presumably in this workplace every work-station would have its set of lights. (Just be sure that the rear lights are a dimmer, and a little softer, and there are no equally-strong specular effects going on, so the viewer’s eyes will notice but won’t be pulled-away.)

Unquestionably worth of The Gallery, even if you did nothing at all further to it. Superlative cartoon-style work with excellent composition and POV.

I suggest that the thread should be re-titled. “job” is not descriptive.