Another loop in my series practicing toon shaders.
Let me know your thoughts!
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ow, poor guy.
Me likes anyways 
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That’s cool 
I think the camera angle isn’t quite well chosen, the guy is hidden behind a stick and can’t read the motion nor expression properly, maybe try moving the cam a little bit on the left.
On the character animation itself, I think you can go further in the jump’s anticipation, maybe also in exaggeration of the shock.
For an extremely stylized presentation, this works very well – the “gust of air” and the rotating flower are a very nice touch, and I also like the aimation of the headpiece which makes them seem very fat and pudgy. The follow-through action of that headpiece striking the far wall, and the posts wiggling slightly, all combine for a very complete and effective rendering of the scene. But, c’mon, let’s see some character realize what’s wrong and come up with something very creative which gets him over the chasm!