Hi, I’ve posted a short film but I was not presented.
So my name is Yannis Brown, I am 14 years old and I am French, I am a passionate animation and drawing since I was little and since one year I discovered Blender and today I present my first Animation I made almost a year ago.
Have fun and give me lots and lots of advice!
(Sorry for the spelling)
It looks pretty good. But the modelling could be better. Also the materials and lighting is not the best. Overall I think you got the basics down and you just need to improve parts of the film. And if you have a nice pc I would suggest trying out cycles for rendering. It gives way better results.
But its a job well done for a new blender user!
Keep on working hard to make your animations greater!
You are new in Blender and you like animation, and what makes me glad seeing that is that YES, you really like that! Has a lot of work in that. I prefer apoint your strong qualitys: You are really good in storytelling, i dont know how is your storyboard but you worked very well in that! You are a beginner and of course it has some weak points but, keep on track, studie and keep you creativity alive! Congratulations!
thats a nice try, you got a big potential for the future animators from france
Great story. Simple modelling but pretty good animating! keep it up
I’m also going for pointing out the positive:
That was really ambitious for a first animation! Three minutes, Five characters, and I don’t know how many sets!
I thank you all, your comments are very encouraging, thank you very much and soon I’ll post new animation!
I believe that a number of people may not have seen the original animation by Pixar. You did an excellent job of capturing the characters from the original. Good work
Thank you very much, it is true that I tried to do my best, given my small knowledge of the time, it’s not perfect but I’m very happy and flattered that you like it! Thank you for your advice and for your encouragement!
hi, this is good animation, you got a big potential for the future animators from whole world…
Thank you, you flatter me a lot!