mattt4001
(mattt4001)
September 26, 2010, 3:31pm
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I have been working on this project for a little while now and it still needs a bit of work. At the moment I still have to finish the back, add a little more interior, and fix the mirror. Criticism is greatly appreciated and suggestions are welcome. I am also curious whether anybody has any pointers or techniques on making good headlights, backlights, and reflectors.
Thanks- matt
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Eris
(Eris)
September 27, 2010, 6:22am
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you should have gone for the newer version.
As for critique, dof seems too much
tom120934
(tom120934)
September 27, 2010, 7:08am
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DoF is indeed too much.
The headlight housing should be black, not reflective. To model them properly, just pay attention to a good refpic, identify the different parts, and the skills you’ve shown will be enough to model each part : http://wallpaperblog.files.wordpress.com/2007/08/lamborghini_gallardo_1_1024.jpg
A good one for side mirrors : http://www.cartype.com/pics/7958/full/lamborghini_gallardo_lp-570-4_superleggera_mirror_10.jpg (these are from a LP570-4 SL but the shape is the same)
Rear lights are the thoughest part in my humble opinion. Here’s a refpic but it’s not perfect http://articles.motortoday.com/testdrive/Gallardo/Gallardo_rear-light.jpg
Some critics :
The seam between hood and front bumper is too thin.
The sides of the front air intakes should be less flat. Check with this refpic http://www.dragtimes.com/images/12888-2006-Lamborghini-Gallardo.jpg
The side edge at bottom of bumper is too sharp.
Please post a DoF free render or clay render, so I can post more critics (if any !)
mattt4001
(mattt4001)
September 28, 2010, 5:43pm
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Thanks for the crits. Ive been busy lately so I havent done mush to the model. I did to a clay render which is attached.
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