A laptop model I made. Rendered in Cycles. Crits welcome.
Glow way to high
Have you ever seen a laptop in darkness?
Good lighting of the screen is very successful.
regards
Yep, I have, and I would say that your image, while the glow may be a little too heavy, is pretty accurate.
I suggest using a more interesting ground… Make it a table or something…
I suggest using a more interesting ground… Make it a table or something…
It’s on a table, but I agree that it is rather empty…
It looks to me like the table and the computer itself are lost in “student murk.” You need to have some illumination of these areas, even if it is of say a dark-blue color.
Looks good, I agree the soft glow seems a bit too much. Also, the casing around the track pad seems too reflective. I’ve never seen a laptop with such a mirror-like material, but that doesn’t mean they don’t exist. Great work, but I think it could be tweaked a bit.
Ever seen a Toshiba Sattelite?