Last chance

I’ve made this animation 9 month ago. Never really posted to anywhere apart from YouTube.
Unfortunately it didn’t reach too many views (128 so far), comparing the effort I put into it (maybe I should do silly “what’s in my bag” videos").
It’s far from perfection, and I still see plenty of mistakes in it. But I’ve done it alone, and everything in it has been built up from scratch, I didn’t steal any mesh.
I’m curious what do you guys think about it, as Blender users.
Thanks for watching. :slight_smile:

Okay. The pacing was good. Animation? Texture? Lighting? Superb. So what went wrong? From my perspective, it’s the direction of the story. I don’t think that there’s enough information for people to keep watching. What could have been done to extend it for, at least, 2 more minutes is to create more scenes like after it takes it to a location to prep for cloning. Then, it looks up the word, war, in the robot’s data base. Have the robot to view through the footage of war and then global warming. I would also suggest some of these realty shows before it decides to destroy the tooth.