LEGBONE - the 3rd broken comercial

yogyog.org/animation/legbone.htm

Please comment.

nearly but not quite there - some of it was too corny, some too slow. However lots of promise - overall style was good and made me laugh. Spinal tap an influence? I loved the line about licking the pickup

Yeah it is a bit spinal tap - I’ve been told a lot of the voices could be better, and it is a bit slow.

I think I might have to do a lot of it again.