Lighthouse

I’m trying to get better. So, if you have any suggestions…I will take them. LOL This was done in 2.91. I am going for an ocean feel and, generally, trying to push my knowledge and make better art.

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Hi, welcome back, tc.

Couple things. Look at composition; what is the focus? How can you line up the main object in an interesting place?

The ocean looks too smooth to be low poly and so seems to not fit. And you can see the borders of the ocean plane which takes away the illusion that it goes on forever. The horizon line should be mostly flat to the camera.

Pay attention to scale. I think the road might look better wider and the boat larger.

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Thanks for the critique. :slight_smile: