I don’t mind the too clean and tidy. What bugs me is the table and the chairs all packed against the wall. I don’t see enough space for anybody to sit on the chairs in between the wall and the table. BTW, do something for the wood texture of the chairs, they look like clones. And tune the white material of the seats, as well as on the couch. I couldn’t say what kind of material it is. Fix also the grey material of the couch, the repetition of the texture is too obvious.
And that huge empty space in the middle! Is it for the goa’uld transport rings to come down from the ceiling? I don’t see any other point of entry. The door-like window at the other end of the room is for the winged people who are not afraid to throw themselves in the void behind it… once they have finished fighting with the curtain which totally blocks the way.
Still, something impressed me: The wool carpet. I know how it’s done and I don’t like the color but I like the result, especially with the light coming from the window and the shadows of the curtains. To me, that’s the killer detail.