Logo for a series

Used Flash and C. Photo Paint…
Just a logo for this project me and my friend are doing…
(if images don’t show up… you know the drill…)

http://server4.rapidgrid.com/~fede/title2.jpg

Some little details here and there:
http://server4.rapidgrid.com/~fede/title22.jpg

Any comments and/or suggestions (specially) would be GREATLY appreciated :slight_smile:

the second one is better but i sugest etting rid of the enhanced green in the background behind it, because the word is harder to read in the second image just because of the contrast between the background and it.

you know how the second image has the red/blue stuff around the edge, well i suggest doing the same for the word but do it black rather than green jusat to raise the contrast a bit

just my sugestion!!!

other than that its pretty cool

Alltaken

make the background color gray. plus, change the color of the text to…hmm…lets see…yellow, and make the X thing all red. something like this:

http://tomhebel.www3.dotnetplayground.com/title22_2.gif

(i appologize for the crappy editing %| )

it needs a DNA strand behind the x, vertically, giving the impression that the x is part of the chain. the background is over crowded, pther coments later

Alltaken: it needs a little bit more contrast… indeed… will work on it.
Blendermax: I like that combination! But i don’t know if my friend’s gonna like it… :smiley:

DNA STRING!?.. ok… %|

Hehehe…

actually your freind likes it :smiley: a lot, but the colors have a meaning with the story, however if you could change the lines above and below anomality to those he used below it will be great, but the background shouldn’t change it’s great as it is :o q gueno los bakgrund q me mandaste
yauuuuu!!!

me usto el fondo gris q le pusiste, pero siento como q falta el lila, no qeda bien en casada y solo arriba como mandasta pero es kul, bue finalmente queda en tus manos hacerlo :stuck_out_tongue: baaaaaaaaaaa!!!

ooops! %| dije mal efecto cascada que solo aparece arriba
yauuuuu!!!