Logo for Group Brand


(goffley3) #1


Hello all. I did a quick redesign of a logo for a group brand a few friends of mine had. Kind of trying to encompass the idea of the futurism. This is mostly used for Twitch stuff. I’ll be using this to follow my intro video for Twitch Blender streams. Any constructive criticisms welcome!

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(bernander) #2

To me, the bars overpower the text, which then is easy to miss or ignore. In fact, the bars almost discourage me to read the text.


(ChameleonScales) #3

There’s not much going on in this picture.
I’d recommend you to take some inspiration from The Mantissa and his 36 days of type (they’re downloadable and CC0)
He explains his workflow in detail in his youtube channel.