After a bunch of updates, and a whopping 3 hour rendering (may not be much for most of you, but I thought my laptop was going to melt) It is done (I hope, but you are still free to critique, though by now you might have realized I won’t add wrinkles under his eyes; It ruins the cartoony feel) and I hope you enjoy it. Stylized trees to help rendering, but I like them…
I like the cartoony style you got there, but I think it could be more dynamic, if you would pose the dude so, that it would look like he’d be alerady running towards the love of his life. You know: he’s hanging in mid air, arm reached forward and so forth.
great job on the cartoony feel. I don’t think you need wrinkles on his eyes, since you get the “old” look from the hair (or lack thereof) and forehead.
The tips of the grass could parhaps be thinner. At the moment it looks like they’re squared at the end, but it’s hard to tell. I didn’t realise he was licking a lollipop at first either
Hey thanks everybody. I might render again, though it probably won’t be soon, or, if it is, the picture won’t be as big. I’ve spotted a fre things I can change, but thanks for your comments!
I have some more small changes to make (as well as a super secret Sequel image on the way). Thanks for your comments and critisism. If I can coax my laptop to render, or figure out how the desktop computer I have magically died: then you might get an update tommorrow.