looking for advice

Hey all Im new to drawing classes not drawing Ive been drawing, not seriously but here and there for adout a year now and I just finished a new piece for AP Drawing Ive never really taken a drawing class before so im not what you’d call experenced but I believe im decent.

I need help on this drawing I “completed” about a week ago It dosent look right and I cant put my finger on it I used a photograph for reference on the hand and the reflection and I rendered a picture for the door knob. your comments would be much appreciated.

-josh-

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The vains are too highlighted. You can make them more blend into the hand.

I see what you mean I drew the hand from a reference and the drawing looks almost exactly like the ref but I dont think it fits with the background Ill give it a try.

Edit: I took it in to photoshop and dropped the brightness and sofened the highlights

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Now make the door background darker or more blurry. No need to keep everything as sharp or you get lost. The hand is now almost blending into the door handle

I think it’s mainly a question of your value range. The drawing is good, but there isn’t enough contrast in the image to make it pop. I did a quick levels adjustment just to show some really basic improvement, but with a bit more work you could really add some depth.

http://img818.imageshack.us/img818/6039/doork.jpg

wow that looks magnificent thanx ben Ill play with it a bit more.

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