Lorena Torquato's graduation project_b3d 2.81

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Architecture Project: Lorena Torquato
Image: Me

Used:

  • Blender 2.81
  • Cycles
  • Photoshop

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Very clean and beautiful renders!

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Thank you!

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Nice work, both in terms of the architecture and the render quality.
A couple of things stand out in my mind:

  1. The skylight seems very insubstantial (the roof would have to be extremely thin for it to work that way), and the mullions don’t appear to join in a realistic way.
  2. All of the chair backs have the exact same wood texture. It might be good to shift the texture around from one to the other, especially on the ones in the foreground.
  3. On the left side, the line where the wall meets the ceiling disappears and it’s hard to read it as a change of plane.

Other than that, I really like the image, the space, and the crisp winter atmosphere.

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