Hey everybody,

I’ve been working on this scene for a couple of days now; this is also my first Blender piece.

Always looking for critiques, pros and cons of the work, being a beginner I’m always looking for ways to improve and learn.

A couple of things that I know I need to improve on:

  • Lighting (directional shadows aren’t being cast from objects, a visible and cartoon-ish sun would be nice)
  • Rigging (moving some of the armatures deformed parts of the mesh, especially the frontal arms which are hidden)
  • Water Material (some of the light levels reflected from the water seem unbalanced compared to others)

Overall, I’m still happy with the project and I can’t wait to start on another…

Any tutorial, documentation or resource recommendations would be awesome!


Camokazee :slight_smile: