The mouth and nose region is good. However, here are my critizisms:
The skull/forehead overall is too small in proportion to the face. The eyes should be near the middle or just slightly above. The jaw goes too far back, it should only reach to about half the depth of the head and the ears likewise needs to move forward.
Good job on the facial features tho!
See I knew the ears were in the wrong place! They always are with me. Oh well that’s the point of my practicing. Thanks for the feedback. I’m going to try and finish this tonight and I’ll take a second pass at the jaw line and move the ears.