OK. This is where I am now. Really need your comments.
For me, working away from the reference is like the man on the flying trapeze without a net. It really scares me. Working from a reference is very secure.
Anyway, as always I eagerly await your comments.
That last post looks really good, nice changes and excellent character ( the eyes look alive now too ) Just keep listening to ben and you’ll do great.
Gally
I went to see some of your work: ink and airbrush. You are a real artist. You have that beauty-seeing eye. I am just a kind of draftsman who sort of gets lost without a reference.
Anyway, that’s why I appreciate all comments.
I’ve put in some skin color to see it better, but there is still a lot of work to do on definition, especially around the mouth. Those muscles need to be defined, I think.
The worry lines above the brows need to be reshaped. The nose is perhaps a little too large. The neck needs to be thickened. The lips have to be reshaped.
The scar needs to be worked on.
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Great improvements. It’s looking really good.
can really feel it’s the same person already, nice !
I did some more work defining the muscles on the lower face. Also I added the scar from his accident.