Mclaren MP4_4

This is the first car I’ve done and it took ages:rolleyes: Any C+C welcome.

http://xs311.xs.to/xs311/07041/mp4_4_1.jpg

oo nice texturing…but it just doesnt look streamlined enough…its abit too blocky…4 stars from me…:slight_smile:

Looks good, agree with tw though. The back wing looks a bit too tall.

The car model looks good, lots of details. I like the decals on the body too. Critiques are that the tires look too shiny/clean. Also the lighting looks a little odd. Have you tried amibent occlusion? It takes a while to render, but it makes images look more real. Overall, it looks like you put a lot of work into this. 4 stars from me.

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Looks like you have done a bit on the suspension from the shadows which you can’t see from this angle. I would recomend a higher viewing angle. Also do you have a ref pic?

Otherwise great job. And a good team to pick? :wink:

For your first car this is very good! 4stars

You’ll enter it in the Challenge, no? :smiley:

i second that…you should enter.:wink: …OH BTW can u please post a wireframe?

Well i carn’t see anything???

mayb consider glasses…

I do wear glasses there where no picture before.

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good work!

the geometry is spot on, must have had a good reference!

rendering is letting you down though, this could be a great shot of a fantastic car.

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