Hi, I’m iiTAGx/Cephin, and this is my first time posting on this forum. Any helpful suggestion/constructive criticism is welcome! (Especially on what to do with the shoulders. THe design is messy. ALso, is the topology alright?)
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Yes the design is messy, I would clean up the shoulder bit before doing anything else, and try and more clearly define the shapes, it all seems a bit of a mish mash right now.
Overall it looks very stylish though
your edges arent clear enough in some of it, i can tell your paying alot of attention to detail but it wont matter if we cant see whats what.
ALright, I took the advice and kept on cleaning up the design and made the lines/form more clear.
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the edges and design of this model are becoming nicely defined. I also suggest trying stick to one style. The head and vent looks like a solid object while the area beneath appears somewhat organic.
keep up the good work 