Hi guys!
trying to achieve some cool renders of a bedroom based on blueprint for a project.
Let me know your thoughts!
Hi! this is a little progress on the bedroom. willing to hear your thoughts!
Hmm. The room itself looks quite good, although something about the materials is not quite right…
And you could improve on the composition 
But I like the overall look.
You are right. I will give this work some space. to think. But fabric texture is strange. Will work on it. Thanks
There seems to be a missing shadow from the bed that’s throwing me off. If you look at the pillows hard shadow and then the floor. I get the feeling the bed is floating in the air.
It’s been already said about the fabric, the pillows seem weird… The wooden part of bed, walls and part of door (if that’s door in the right corner) seem to be flat, imo they lack bumps and scratches.
I’m not sure about the floor - it’s good, although seems like it could have some random patches too.
And the tree in the pot - is it solid shader (like clay render) ? It’s grey and seems like it shouldn’t.
The overall image is good, I like that a bit desaturated look in those blueish hues and other objects in scene.
Yes you’re right. The bed’s “legs” as it is said in my country, are too thin. I have to work on that, also on the hardness of the lighting.
That’s a must do definitively. thanks man.
Yes, the window’s door will be a sliding door, it will have more detail I hope. 
I will work on the bed. (it’s a premade model by the way)
the pot shouldn’t be clay, I will work on that as well.
There is a long way to achieve what I am looking for this render. But the wheels are turning…
thanks for your comments and you will see progress on this. 
Cheers
Going nice! Imo pillows would need some wrinkles at their center area. They look too much flat/uniform.
