Hi,
This modern house is my first render ever using blender. I am looking for some constructive criticism that may help the photo become more realistic. Thank you
Before you read this, I would like to say I think it’s a really great work. The criticism Im giving here gonna make it to perfection, it doesn’t mean it’s not good right now. So lets go:
- too much dirt on the roof (make it less noticed), and there are some placed that too much clean (buttom of walls, garage glass and so…)
- grass way too saturated in my taste, and doesn’t mixing well with the low-saturated house.
- the pink flowers is obviously copy-pasted. try to make a small difference between each other (start by a simple rotation).
- The big grey floor in front of the garage is just too clean-too big-and its purpose is not sure. is it play yard? add models for clues, is it another outside-garage? add wheels dirt to eat or something like that.
- I would add a real tree in the grass section, to give a reason for all of those leaves…
Again, those will make it perfect. It’s very good as it is right now.
Thank you eyalmu, your critique is greatly appreciated. I’ll work on all you suggested
Hi
for a first render i find that you did a great job, im sure you will even make it better, please post new photos after the modifications
thank you
Hey well done!
Maybe you may wanna consider adjusting the windows (right building) to slightly darker colors, cos it seems overpowering the scene.
The windows reflection (left building) looks kinda matte and lifeless, probably can increase the reflective value too.
Can‘t wait to see your next render.
Thank you all for the kind words, I’ll be honest and say I was not expecting this type of response mainly because I judge myself so hard and I was even nervous about posting this image…lol…However, I am currently working on an interior scene and as soon as it is completed I will i will post and then update this render and repost pics